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Re: babygirl
I liked this, loved the tone. I wasn't completely convinced about the bits in brackets. Liked the way you ended it, the last line completed the poem and summed it ...
Dec 24, 2004 -
Re: When Eternity isn’t Forever
Ta :D
Dec 24, 2004 -
Re: What's Your Mushy Song?
A Little Respect by Wheatus And Do They Know It's Christmas? makes me cry. The old one, not the new one.
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
EBM is known for being the protector of humans, small cast and other vermin. Heh, that was easy!
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: incubi (16+)
Loved it. Short but effective. I thought I'd hate it when I read the second line, but great. You're a brave writer, some people wouldn't dare write like that. It's ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: cyber (16+)
You created a great atmosphere. I liked it a lot. Particularly like the beginning and end few lines. Keep writing.
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: Gravity (Yes, this is me with a poem)
I liked the layout of the first stanza, you represented gravity visually, not just with words. Also, I liked the last stanza because it seemed to suggest that you're not ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: And He Came
I liked the atmosphere of this poem. Good work.
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: letting you go
T'was pretty good. Didn't blow me away, but I liked "Some girl to give up all that she has/or, by the time you get to her, all that she had". ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: Haiku: Rice Krispies
Yeah, I guess it does help you imagine the sounds. And brings back memories of eating breakfast when I was younger. Yuck, I am so sick of Rice Krispies. And ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: Matt
So this is the bit where I ramble on about myself and hope someone reads it, and possibly even cares. Just a tiny bit. My real name is Samantha, which ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: On Catching a Falling Star
I liked it a lot. Especially the ending, reminded me of Bon Jovi's These Days.
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: beneath the skin
Loved it. Great imagery.'..I have no constructive criticism.
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: Life's Many Lessons
Not sure if I liked the poem itself, as in the subject, but I liked the way you wrote it as if it was the end of a thought you're ...
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: Helpless Without My Friends
Right, I'ma go through the poem systematically for once. Here goes. I didn't like the repetition of "without no friends" (which should anyway, gramatically, be "without ANY friends", I didn't ...
Dec 19, 2004
